Our honorable judge Author cum Dr. Rachit Bhushan says:
“In my opinion every article was good as they reminded me of good old college days.Since I had to select a winner out of the lot I liked KSHITIJA AND GUNJAN LALWANI’S article to be very effective. Khishitija’s article was sweet and loving and it makes one curious to read more.The language is simple and anybody can relate to it with ease.The next one is Gunjan’s article which got me a smile.It was a bit immature kind of writing but what attracted me was that she wrote it with an open heart.That is what creativity is  all about,you don’t bother to win and write what your heart feels.It seemed as if i could feel the bubbly girl’s life moving in front of my eyes.So in my view these 2 stand as bracketed winners for BMS CONTEST.At number three is SUNITA SHARMA and frankly speaking i loved the way she scripted about her first day in college.It was simple and precise without much exaggeration and yea you should get up early to attend your college.At 4 stands HENAL JAVERI.I liked the way she described her class 606 and kept an eye on every of her batchmate instead of attending lectures which is the common scene in every college on day 1.Loved that line as if ”yaha baithna mana hai”.At 5 stands article by SHRUTI SRAN.Loved the way she described her confidence with the line ”make it or break it”.She was able to describe about her teachers and friends very well and looked confident while expressing her emotions.So guys congratulations to all the winners.Just 1 suggestion:BOYS WORK HARD,MANY SPELLING ERRORS AND MISTAKES BUT THEN KEEP TRYING.GIRLS FINISH IT 5-0 IN COMPARISON TO BOYS.”
Winning entries:
http://www.bms.co.in/my-first-day-at-jes-college/ |
http://www.bms.co.in/my-first-day-at-ves-bms-college/ |
Below are the shortlisted article entries of the writing contest:
All the participants will be mailed their e-certificates and discount vouchers by 15th August 2013 and
Winners can contact [email protected] to collect their prizes.
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